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tsdragon

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I heard this on the news this weekend:
The Pope will be following services this Sunday, but he will not be leading them.
My first reaction was "Huh?".

Tracy Dryden

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For you are crunchy, and good with mustard. [dragon]
 
The Pope has been ill as of late. There is a Pope health Watch going on in the media right now. He has the flu, but listening to them, you'd think he is drawing his last breath.

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Understand that I don't mean to belittle the pope, but is it possible to be sure he isn't? It feels a bit like Weekend at Bernie's sometimes.

I don't see how anyone can be sure that any message from the pope is actually from him and not the non-elected "inner circle" that surrounds him.

Just my 2 cents

~Thadeus
 
That certainly was a poor statement from the news. I think the significance, and the intent, of the statement is that yesterday was the first time in twenty five years that this Pope did not lead Sunday services.

But what an awful way to say it. You would think a professional journalist would have better command of the language.

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The phraseology (?) is quite Catholic orientated .... but nevertheless is badly put !!!!
JP II has been VERY ill and had a tracheotomy to allow him to breath.
I do agree with Thadeus, the inner workings of the Catholic Church are shrouded in mystery to say the very least. I would say thought, that any input will have only been quite recent, despite the illnesses, JP II is a very charasmatic man with a massive presence (I met him in Rome) so I can't see him being too "bullied" !!!

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>I don't see how anyone can be sure that any message from the pope is actually from him and not the non-elected "inner circle" that surrounds him.

Very very little comes from the Pope alone. Everything is choreographed for maximum "holy" effect. I am not belittling the papacy. But, the Vatican is just as political as any other country.

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That being said, I'm sure we all agree that the language of this statement leaves a lot be desired.

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CC, why, might I ask? I understood it immediately...
 
Thadeus - The coordinating conjunction 'but' should be used when the two clauses contrast with each other. I don't find 'following' and 'not leading' to be contrasting. If, as stated in the first clause, the Pope will be following services, what contrast is being presented in the second clause?

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CC,

The coordinating conjunction 'but' should be used when the two clauses contrast with each other.

I don't find it always to be the case. Could you suggest a better conjunction for the sentence? Or better phrasing, for that matter?

I also understood it immediately.
 
CC Leading is used here in the context of being the Celebrant of the Mass .... I think the idea that is meant is that although JP II won't be on the altar actually saying the Mass, he will be there "In Spirit" (i.e. he's not quite dead yet !!!!)

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I understood it immediately as well, but understanding it does not mean it's grammatically correct.

There are several coordinating conjunctions that may be used including and, but, for, nor, or, so, and yet. Which is best to use depends on the relationship between the two independant clauses being joined.

In this case, the second clause is redundant. If you 'are following', then by defintion, you have to be 'not leading'. It is redundant therefore, not contrasting. However, consider the following, which is simply a reversal of the two clauses.

The Pope will not be leading services this Sunday, but he will be following them.

The difference is that 'not leading' does not mean that you are following. You can be doing nothing. Therefore, you have a clause of what the Pope is not doing, contrasted with a clause about what he is doing.

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If you insist on using the same construct, I think 'so' would be a better choice as the coordinating conjunction. So is used when the second clause follows, as in a conclusion, from the first clause.

The Pope will be following services this Sunday, so he will not be leading them.

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I agree that your first construct really is clearer than the original one.

The Pope will not be leading services this Sunday, but he will be following them.

Your second construct, though, is more confusing than the original sentence. It sounds as artificial as a cause-and-effect example for elementary school students.

The Pope will be following services this Sunday, so he will not be leading them.

Almost like

The Pope will be following services this Sunday, therefore he will not be leading them.

Just my opinion, anyway.
 
I agree that the second construct appears to be an artificial cause-and-effect example. My first thought when 'hearing' it was "duh!!!". But I don't see 'but' working any better, and to some degree, I think it's worse because you're stuck trying to find a contrast in a tautology.

In any event, one benefit of this thread is that it illustrates that choice of coordinating conjunction does make a difference.

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I think some of you are missing my point. Regardless of whether you use "but", "so", "therefore", or any other conjunction the statement is stupid. "Following" is the opposite of "leading". If the Pope is following the services he cannot be leading them, and vice versa. Either of the two statements alone would have been sufficient. Combining them offers no new information whatsoever, and is completely redundant.

That is what I thought was so stupid.

And I have another pet peeve that one of the posts here reminded me of: People who say "orientated" instead of "oriented". (No offense to the person who did that is intended.)

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...and lead us not into the downward spiral of orientated and conversate(d)...
 
CajunCenturion said:
I agree that the second construct appears to be an artificial cause-and-effect example. My first thought when 'hearing' it was "duh!!!". But I don't see 'but' working any better, and to some degree, I think it's worse because you're stuck trying to find a contrast in a tautology.
Actually, I think 'but' works much better. It contrasts his normal activity to his current activity in a measure of degree (or something).

Q: If JP[sup]2[/sup] is not leading the service, will he be listening or watching? Does he have some input on the services? What the deuce is going on with the Pope?

A: He will be following the services.

..oh, thanks.

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I agree with Mr3Putt that 'but' works much better. The combination of 2 clauses does bear additional information, and does contrast his normal activity to his current activity.
 
The purpose of a coordinating conjunction is to establish the relationship between the two independent clauses in the sentence. As originally written, the first clause is:

The Pope will be following services this Sunday, but,

With respect to your question Mr3Putt, you already have the answer. The Pope will be following the services. It is not until the second clause that the 'not leading' is brought into play. If the second independent clause of a sentence suggests a question already answered in the first independent clause, then, as in this case, you have a tautology, not a contrast.

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