This is what I have
I think the "when I want but feel" is a little confusing with no comma after "when I want". Also I don't think the comma is necessary after "what I want"
Your input is always appreciated!
~LFCfan
Short stories, mainly in fantasy/SF settings.
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I can write what I want, when I want but feel I can’t leave it too long before I post something new.
I think the "when I want but feel" is a little confusing with no comma after "when I want". Also I don't think the comma is necessary after "what I want"
The above looks better to me, but then the subject is the same in both parts... Without a comma the sentence might run on a bit too much. What would you advise?I can write what I want when I want, but feel I can’t leave it too long before I post something new.
Your input is always appreciated!
~LFCfan
Short stories, mainly in fantasy/SF settings.
Come along and tell me what you think of the worlds I build!