Website Review Request 2

[Shadowboi]

Guys,

I have started a new company that goes live on the 25th of this month and am already on version 9 of the website. Please let me know what you think, and be brutal : )

http://titanwebdevelopment.users.btopenworld.com

Thanks guys,
Gareth

 

[Wullie]

Hi mate,

First thing that will loose you half of your visitors in the meta refresh, I nearly closed the browser thinking that the image was the whole site.

Your banner with the domain names on it is too prominent and takes focus off the navigation.

If that is the domain name that you plan to use for the business, don't. A web design company that cannot afford their own domain name or hosting shouldnt be trying to sell them to other users.

Please use the navigation bar above to make your particular selection

First thought when I saw this was "Eh, thats how I got here". Internet/Intranet is not clear enough as options that relate to the services that you offer, I looked up and thought those links had been there the whole time. Never ask a user to click something then read a piece of text telling them to look somewhere else and click that.

Add a smaller sample of the content of both sections to the products page and then provide links to the precise sections.

You state that the prices include VAT, yet I do not see any VAT number on the site, I also do not see a physical address. Either I have missed this or you better get in touch with a solicitor regarding recent laws relating to websites.

Titan New Media will always publish a draft of a website for you to view and change. If not acceptable and a further draft is required, a charge of £35 including VAT will apply

Bad thing to hide away on the site, if you want to include this, make it prominent. People will read your T&C's and the way you currently have it, it looks like you are trying to hide it away from view. This would make me think about what other charges that you may try to add to the price.

Hope this helps Wullie

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[DeZiner]

800 X 600 there is horizontal scroll.

I have to agree with Wullie on the landing page and the refresh. I was dying trying to figure out where to click. Had I come across the site looking for a developer I most likely would have left prior to the refresh. I think adding at least an "Enter" link would help.

As well the products page referencing the navigation is awkward. DeZiner
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[Shadowboi]

Thanks guys,

I thought as much with reagrds to the navigation.. will action that shortly. That will not be the address of the site, it is only a testing space, domain will be

http://www.titan-uk.co.uk.

I have asked a graphic design company to work on the graphical horizontal bar for me, and also several vertical graphics to drop down the right hand side.

Thanks for your time...
Gareth

 

[Shadowboi]

This has been updated should you get a chance to have another gander.

The enter button will be changed but should give you the general idea, I have also changed the graphic and improved the links system. I won't bother you guys with this one again.

Thanks
Gareth