Hi, could you please review my site and check out my bargains etc just see if its ok and if you can spot anything wrong like a proof read thanks!
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sorry the site is stuckforhosting.com, stuckforhosting.net and stuckforhosting.co.uk (all the same)
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Flash movie doesn't load on first page, in fact it only seems to appear on the "Services" page.
The product pages are just a long list of features that buts right up against the left edge of the browser window.
The "more" link under the Stuck for hosting paragraph on the home page doesn't work.
When I click a link to buy a hosting package, tha page simply asks me for a domain name. Does this mean I am registering a domain with you? What if I don't want to? This isn't particularly clear. You should give some more indication of what you want the user to do, perhaps show a list of the steps they will go through to open an account.
An introductory step by step would be good here.
Maybe put the comparison table in a more accessible place on the site? It's nice to see what you are getting for your money. The list of what scripts and addons you have available is potentially a big selling point.
Also, the last sentence doesn't make sense.
"All annual prices. Monthly tarifs also available."?
I think the phrase "All Annual Prices" isn't quite right.
Other than that list of things that could easily be fixed... the site looks nice. The flash movie, when I can see it, is neat. I would make sure that there is some other obvious navigation at the top of the page when the Flash movie fails though.
As for pricing, you seem to be offering similar services to many other hosts for similar prices. What is your Unique Selling Proposition (USP)? In short, why should I go with you as opposed to XYZHost.com? Work out what your USP is and capitalise on it.
Hmm this seems like another Foamcow hatchett job. I must be getting cantancerous in my old age ;-)
Really though, the site looks OK, just needs a few things addressing.
The product pages are just a long list of features that buts right up against the left edge of the browser window.
The "more" link under the Stuck for hosting paragraph on the home page doesn't work.
When I click a link to buy a hosting package, tha page simply asks me for a domain name. Does this mean I am registering a domain with you? What if I don't want to? This isn't particularly clear. You should give some more indication of what you want the user to do, perhaps show a list of the steps they will go through to open an account.
An introductory step by step would be good here.
Maybe put the comparison table in a more accessible place on the site? It's nice to see what you are getting for your money. The list of what scripts and addons you have available is potentially a big selling point.
Shouldn't the above paragraph have capital letters at the start of the sentences? If it's a style thing, then the first sentence shouldn't have a capital.
Also, the last sentence doesn't make sense.
That's just guff really isn't it? What does it mean? You have a new Cpanel theme?
I am guessing, but shouldnt this read somehting like:
"All annual prices. Monthly tarifs also available."?
I think the phrase "All Annual Prices" isn't quite right.
Other than that list of things that could easily be fixed... the site looks nice. The flash movie, when I can see it, is neat. I would make sure that there is some other obvious navigation at the top of the page when the Flash movie fails though.
As for pricing, you seem to be offering similar services to many other hosts for similar prices. What is your Unique Selling Proposition (USP)? In short, why should I go with you as opposed to XYZHost.com? Work out what your USP is and capitalise on it.
Hmm this seems like another Foamcow hatchett job. I must be getting cantancerous in my old age ;-)
Really though, the site looks OK, just needs a few things addressing.
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Hi, ive tried to fix the main things youve said, also i dont know what you mean by the flash cutting it seems to be fine by everyone els who veiws is. thanks for your views
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The services page is calling the file "02hosting_3.swf".
The other pages are calling "02hosting_2.swf"
It is,however visible in IE6, so my guess is that you have a problem in your CSS which is causing the movie to be hidden somewhere.
The other pages are calling "02hosting_2.swf"
It is,however visible in IE6, so my guess is that you have a problem in your CSS which is causing the movie to be hidden somewhere.
There are still some things in this copy.. how about something like....(not saying this is perfect though!)
How does that sound?
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