Please check my site out? 4

[Aishaa]

Hi - I know it's a simple site, nothing impressive, but please review it and give me some pointers?

http://www.serafimenterprises.com

TIA
Aishaa

 

[DeZiner]

I was looking for problems rather than layout and content.

http://www.serafimenterprises.com/castle_modification.html

This page has a javascript error in the lower left pic. It does not think you have defined the pic to use a rollover maybe or some other effect. DeZiner
Never be afraid to try something new.
Remember that amateurs built the Ark.
Professionals built the Titanic

 

[Bentley22]

(Special note to Canadian customers: All U.S. prices are being offered at par to American prices for a limited time.)

Umm, do you mean "par to Canadian prices"? Otherwise, that sounds a little redundant. (All U.S. prices in U.S. dollars?)

 

[Boomerang]

Hi Aishaa,

I checked your site in IE4 and NN4.73 and both look great.

Here are some little details:

1) At each page you have an underlined heather like
Website Development

I allways put my mouse over it to see if it's a link. I should underline it, but this is personal.

2) At the Website Development page I found a broken link at "contact us" :

http://www.serafimenterprises.com/SerafimEnterpriz@netscape.net

I think this was supposed for email contact ?


Hope this helps you,
Erik

 

[Thanks]

Thanks, Eric - I appreciate you found it good.
I was hoping it would be ok since it is my first attempt at this online.
I will improve it over time, I know the graphics aren't that great (many of the originals I worked with were grainy to start with).

I also appreciate all the feedback I am getting, good or bad, thanks, guyz!

Aishaa

 

[JHoarty]

Hey, site looks good. Not bad at all. On the word processing page (and I think of all pages this one should be error free!), you use in a couple of places the words "Serafim Enterprises" in a possessive manner but without an apostrophe.

"Take advantage of Serafim Enterprises expertise and let us tackle all your Word processing jobs! "

Since your company is named "Serafim Enterprises" (plural), I believe the correct spelling of the possessive is
"Serafim Enterprises'", so the example I gave should be:

"Take advantage of Serafim Enterprises' expertise and let us tackle all your Word processing jobs! "

There are a couple of instances on that page.

John Hoarty
jhoarty@quickestore.com

http://www.quickestore.com

 

[Wullie]

Hi,

Nice looking site.

Couldn`t find anything but the items mentioned in the other posts.

By the way, JHoarty is right, the correct spelling is Serafim Enterprises'.

Hope this helps Wullie

http://www.survivorhelp.co.uk

 

[Wullie]

I just had another quick look and noticed the following.

"What types of scanning is offered"

I am not totally sure as to whether this is correct in the US or not as I am from Scotland but here it would be:

"What types of scanning are offered"

When working with plurals use are instead of is as a general rule.

(Eg. He is there. They are there.)

Hope this helps Wullie

http://www.survivorhelp.co.uk