One page site review

[DeZiner]

Just did one page to get some feedback on.

Thanks!

http://www.dezinepost.com/new

DeZiner
Never be afraid to try something new.
Remember that amateurs built the Ark.
Professionals built the Titanic

 

[cian]

Hi DeZiner,

Few comments which I hope will help: IE6 1024*

1.The main logo DeZine Post, i don't like the text effect, it makes it a little hard to read. maybe it's my eyes!

2. the slogan, Creative Affordable Websites looks more like links or separate words to me. I'd bring the words closer together and only capatalise the first letter of the firstword.

3. The main paragraph needs more top margin.

4. The top links (protfolio, services etc) could be moved a little lower.

5. the phone number is difficult to read. my eyes again.

6. Overall it looks just a little cramped in the top right corner, maybe space it out a little more.


Hope that helps, really nice page!



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http://www.endamcg.com

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http://www.endamcg.com/finland-gaa

 

[BigBadDave]

The words arn't capatlised its the font he's using (BankGothic Lt BT) I agree about the spacing though. I also agree the title and phone number are a little hard to read maybe darken the blue slightly and not fade out to white Regards
David Byng

http://www.byngdesigns.co.uk

davidbyng@hotmail.com

 

[cian]

Hi Dave,

Oops my mistake. however the first letter of each word is bigger, I think it should only be on the first word.
I'll look close next time!

The date is also a little small. Making it plain text instead of italics will make it easier to read.


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http://www.endamcg.com

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http://www.endamcg.com/finland-gaa

 

[mithrilhall]

I agree with:

2. the slogan, Creative Affordable Websites looks more like links or separate words to me. I'd bring the words closer together and only capatalise the first letter of the firstword.

and:

darken the blue slightly and not fade out to white.


Overall, it looks good in Mozilla at 1024x768. ====================================
I love people. They taste just like
chicken!

http://mithrilhall.redirectme.net

 

[MoonHare]

DeZiner,
After looking at it with IE6, I viewed it with Nav 4.7.... the text in the main body is very tiny relative to the other text in the Nav. But it looks very good otherwise.

I agree with the shadowed phone number being hard to read (in either browser), but I like the shadowed effect in the "creative affordable websites" text as well as in the logo.

Yours,
The Moonhare

 

[onpnt]

MoonHare
Drop NN 4.7

the percentage is next to nothing for viewers

http://www.w3schools.com/browsers/browsers_stats.asp

A language that doesn't affect the way you think about programming is not worth knowing.

http://www.onpntwebdesigns.com

admin@onpntwebdesigns.com

 

[cian]

Don't know how much you can believe stats but the only way to go forward is to give up on these crappy old browsers.

Worrying about those stats is that over 10% have JS turned off! Why?


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http://www.endamcg.com

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http://www.endamcg.com/finland-gaa

 

[SPYDERIX]

Hi,

This isn't really a problem, but you might consider adding extra white space after your background image so that it doesn't tile on computers with high resolutions, simply add white to the right of your cirlces and make your image's width bigger than 1200 pixels. You don't have to do that, just my opinion so that it makes the site look good for people using high resolutions. Other than that it looks pretty good.

Hope this helps!

NATE
design@spyderix-designz.com

http://www.spyderix-designz.com