Need comments on game

[ryDen]

Hi!

I have designed and made a Flash game as part of my school project. The objective of the game is to educate diabetic kids on juvenile diabetes, and the part I have "completed" is targeted towards kids from 4 to 6, and covers mainly the issue on diabetic care.

I will be improving further on the game and adding an intro, but meanwhile, wuold appreciate if you could comment on the present version here:

http://www16.brinkster.com/denyr/fyp/maingame.htm

Thanks in advance =P.

Regards,
Russ

 

[billwatson]

very impressive...very good graphics

i guess you have done your research but i would have thought the audience for what i saw would be older than 4-6. i am not sure many of them can read that well at so young an age.

when typing in a partners name why not have the text vanish when the box gets clicked rather than have to delete whats there already. (again its a user age thing).

im not sure why it pops open in another window either.

at the end of the day this could make a useful piece of educational software and you might well want to look at distrubuting it on cd.

for a school project this an excellent bit of work and ought to get an A+.

 

[wangbar]

Really like the backgrounds and the 3D feel to the characters.

My only nitpicks (and that's all they are because this is an excellent piece of work) are the mouse being hidden when the alarm clock character appears which I think will confuse young users (it confused me ;-)) and the fact that you're using the common library buttons: the rest of the graphic look and feel is so distinctive that it's a pity not to have it reflected in the interface elements too.

Impressive.