Crucify My Site Please 2

[Chance1234]

Firsltly no claims are made here of being a web designer, having any clue to what it is im actually doing or knowing what it is im trying to do (or who i am for that matter )

here is the link to my site

http://www.5ylac.s5.com

Crucify away ! ! seriously some helpful structured criticism would be appreciated , and my techy knowledge on this side is really at the level Wahay it only took 6 weeks to actually get that damm thing up)


Cheers

Chance


Chance

 

[GUJUm0deL]

chance, let the crusification begin...lol...
Ok, seriously these are my comments:
1) Try putting the links inside of a table that has some spaces between, in IE5.5 they look all pressed together...you can alos try having a fancy Javascript menu (they have some cool FREE ones at

http://www.dynamicdrive.com)

2) The scrolling effect is nice, but its kinda fast, try having it a but slower...and also try putting it inside of a table so it isn't the entire width of the browser window...

3) Try adding some kind of a background image so it looks more appealing...

That's all for now...
Hope I helped... I have not failed; I merely found 100,000 different ways of not succeding...

 

[Chance1234]

Cewl thanks for the link , ho ho ho

 

[Boomerang]

Hi Chance,

Here some more comment :

1) The text ALL LINKS IN YELLOW ARE COMING SOON! looks like a link to. Personal I always put my mouse over such text to see if it is a link and think it's annoying if it is not a link.

2) The links NUN JOKES and LINKS are working but the are still "yellow" !!!

3) The links NUN JOKES and LINKS stay "yellow" after being activated. All the others turn "red".

4) If the user clicks the links on the page LINKS the new page stay in the same browser. At that moment the users loose the focus from your site.
If you code <a target=&quot;_blank href=.... these links are opened in a other browser.

(the same for links like :

http://public.fotki.com/chance1234/mortus_illumina_1st/

on the page &quot;pglinks5ylac.htm&quot

5)

http://www.themarraigecarraigecompany.co.uk/

is a broken link probably. I got the error &quot;The Web site cannot be found&quot;

6)On the page &quot;pgtrumps.htm&quot; you have 36 picture Each picture is about 21 KB / 22 KB . So total it's 36 * 21,5 = 775 KB !!!!

But each picture consist of 25% realy the photo and the other 75% is text-information.

With paint shop pro I extracted the photo (with the &quot;crop&quot; function) and saved this .JPG with &quot;compression factor 15(%)&quot; wich is OK for web-publication. Result is a picture of 5KB. (36 * 5 = only 180 KB)

Now you can make a <table> with on the first row 4 times the text &quot;Evil Nuns ...&quot;
On the second row only the 4 pictures and in row 3, 4, 5, 6 etc. the rest of the text information (like &quot;ROLE: -- SPECIAL : -- WEAKNESS: etc.).

Then you start e new row with 4 times the text &quot;Evil Nuns ...&quot; etc., etc.

I will send you a small picture via your email on your site!

7)I can hardly read the text at the bottom : &quot;All images, Clips, Text, music on these pages or relating ... &quot;

It's to small for this kind of fond. Try someting like &quot;arial&quot;

8) On all pages you take different font-colors. Try to make it more consistant with the same color.

9) OOPS, on page &quot;pgsighting.html&quot; my Mcafee virus-scanner recognized a VIRUS !!! the message I got :

&quot;the site &quot;pgsighting.html&quot; is infected with the &quot;VBS/Haptime@MM&quot; virus.

Please do someting about it !!

Fortunately I had a updated virus-defefintions.

I hope you don't mind I stop with reviewing your site now.

I'll send you the promised &quot;picture&quot; by mail.

Hope I helped you,
Erik

 

[Chance1234]

not at all, dont know why that Virus thing is coming up someone else had it come up as well with the nimda virus. i have checked scan the pages to no effect on that note.

Thanks for the feedback look forward ot seeing the pic

 

[Boomerang]

I already send the picture, but got an error mail back.

Please post your email-address here !! Then I'll send you the picture again.

Erik

Here is the text form that error-mail:

This file was automatically generated by the automailer-bot. The address you sent mail to should have returned a file, however that file wasn't found.

If you reply to this mail, and mention the address you tried to send mail to, then this problem can be fixed.

Have a nice day

--
MM automailer v2.1 - 20010125

 

[Chance1234]

5ylac@ukonline.co.uk this one works!