ahoy....site check time!! Oooh yeah

[taldos]

check out my site, let me know what you think

http://www.okoto.net

and I'm gone

 

[SPYDERIX]

Hi there,

- This page does not fit on screen resolution of 800*600 there should be no side to side scrolling.
- your popup window "Conditions and terms of use" scrolls side to side too
- your flash movies look really nice however there are 2 things I'll mention about the "Envision Flash (Free Spirit)" one:
1- I don't like those navigation buttons at the top, too confusing at first and too much movement, they should scroll down or something
2- this popup window should be maximized and not in restore mode, and it should be 800*600 max

and
- you should get rid of the "Flash Site Requirement" of 1024*768, not professional, you should cater to those who use 800*600.

It looks good on MSIE-6.0, Netscape 4.7, and Netscape 6.2

Other than that I think you have an excellent site.

¡Buena Suerte!

 

[Boomerang]

Hi taldos,

I agree with SPYDERIX especially about the 800*600 resolution.

Here is some additional comment:

1) the image "ater(business2)" with the 8 rectangle takes a lot of space. Make it smaller and users have a lot less to scroll

2)Maybe you can add some form-validation to your "contact us" form. Now you can send a email address without "@"

3)I don't understand the meaning of the image "tree1" on EVERY page. I like it on the Home-page, but see no need to show it one every page.

Hope this helps,
Erik
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[xutopia]

I didn't like the free spirit design as the menu moved too much to my liking.

The design is really nice on your corporate side of things. However I believe you could use your talent a little bit better if you used what you knew about flash to keep your visitors rivveted to the information you are trying to convet rather then the eye candy you are capable of creating (and it is a pleasure for the eyes).

I would like if you could put more of a story to your site using the 4 rectangles and make them appear one at a time so that our eyes aren't all over the place.

Anything that moves or changes opacity should be as close as possible to your content and emphasize it as much as possible. Not take away from it.

You definitly have talent and an eye for things. I recommend you read the Yale Web Style Guide and transpose it to your flash experience.

Hope these comments help you improve. Gary

http://www.xutopia.com

Haran

 

[hads]

Hey,

Me too. The design is great, I agree you have got talent there. My only point would be the same as above, on the 'Free Spirit' site the menu is a bit active for my liking.

Can someone else check the 'Free Spirit' site from linux - it crashes mozilla and konqueror on my linux box.

Well done.


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[iSeriesCodePoet]

There are some problems in Opera 6.0 in the HTML site. In flash it looks pretty good. Free Spirit didn't work at all and like a couple others mentioned. I really didn't like the free spirit.

Overall, it looks pretty good though. Mike Wills
AS400 Programmer

http://www.koldark.net

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[taldos]

made a few changes on the corporate site, let me know what you think.

thanks for all your comments

 

[GUJUm0deL]

Hi...the site looks verry sleek and nice...
But it still doesn't fit inside of an 800*600 resolution, are you coding for higher resolutions only?? I see you have a small note about FLASH SITE REQUIREMENTS and it lists screen resolution as 1024*768...but I would also have something for a 800*600 resolution...
I would implement CSS tags especialy for the links portion, they looks very professional...
But all in all, good, no wait, great job!! I have not failed; I merely found 100,000 different ways of not succeding...